Monday, February 9, 2009

Sand ...

The wind blowing through
Hair flying with hazy footprints
The sand oozes through the fingers
Leaving behind nothing
A sensation though
Like a lingering touch
A loved one now far away
A smile remembered fondly
Thoughts of times gone by
Washing away with the unruly waves
Leaving behind nothing ...
But the promise of tomorrow
And another sunrise
More sand, more waves
And more memories to be made ...

9 comments:

mohitparikh said...

nice work!

Adisha said...

thanks mohit :)

Priya said...

That is lovely...

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hi!
You have a really sweet blog. I loved this poem of yours. it's beautiful! :)
Take Care!

Adisha said...

Thankyou for your lovely compliment.

cutestangel said...

lovely descriptive writing.I love beaches and you brought it alive.

Anonymous said...

Nice job Adi
--luv Tasnim

Lavanya Snigdha said...

Nice imagery and also it leaves a lingering sensation behind...
good...
:)

Adisha said...

@ Tasnim - Thanks

@ Lavanya - Thanks for your kind compliments dear :)

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