Friday, April 17, 2009

Walking in the rain ...

Oh ! the blessed rain,
to wash away all the stains,
of yesterday, of fears and old pain ...

the drops fall down hitting hard,
soothing sounds, earthy smells, winds on their guard,
each magical sensation it's own reward ...

walking down the street,
in every way complete,
holding my own admitting no defeat ...

drenched to the core, but standing high,
these pleasures no one can deny,
to the cloudy days, I say goodbye ...

6 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

beautiful rhyme it was :)..i love walking in the rain its always removes the pain and i love to be in spain :P...

it has a awesome meaning and i always hate to say good bye to clouds :(..

urs..hemu..

Zainab Dhanji said...

Beautiful

Priya said...

walking down the street,
in every way complete,
holding my own admitting no defeat ...


- Truth of life.. words.

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raj87 said...

Walking in the rain...Nice theme...

Brosreview said...

I like the rhyme and the overall simplicity in your writing. Rains make one feel a lot! I agree to that! Nicely worded!

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