Saturday, October 11, 2008

Now that you've gone ...

Are you here around me,
Holding me as I sway?
Your memories a part of me,
Turning my nights into day ...

Were we ever together,
or was it all a mirage?
A few seconds or was it years,
It seems just a beautiful facade ...

Now you're gone & I'm still here,
Making sense of days flown away,
Touching all that's left behind,
Fearing d solitary moments on my way ...

But I won't let you down,
Will brave them all with heartfelt smiles,
So in time when we meet again,
I'll have more tales to amuse you with;
as we walk across the skies ...

8 comments:

Comfortably Numb said...

Noicee!! A poem to my exact liking. Maybe cos my genre is kind of similar. Very well done.

Cheers!!

Adisha said...

Thanks. Hope to keep writing to your liking ... :) Looking forward to going thru your blog!

Cheers ...

Comfortably Numb said...

I will look forward to reading a LOT more from you too :)

Cheers!!

Priya said...

A deep sense of longingness..

Adisha said...

Thanks Priya.

Emilio said...

the last stanza is amazing. Creates such a beautiful image.

Adisha said...

Thanks Emilio :)

Pathfinder said...

This is a really good poem , you are able to express it perfectly . I try my hand at it too sometimes . keep writing more poetry :)

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