Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Days ...

my life, my terms
a blank slate with chalk marks
like a road well trodden
with varied tire tracks
written n re written
every moment every day
different rides of a carnival
experiences flashing away
colors and feelings
rain on a parched field
leaving behind notches inscribed
an exceptional essence yield ...

7 comments:

Shruti Mukundan said...

well.. wat do i say.. this blog of urs i mean (the whole of ur poetic works) doesnt need comments.. i hav gone thru many of ur poems but never understood wat to comment... passing thoughts.. let it just pass by... its always a pleasure to read them :)

ARUNA said...

hey awesome blog......nice poetry!

charizma said...

im in love wid the free verse style of writing!!! :)
thts my all time favorite way to write poetry :D
keep going!!
i wanna come back as often as i could!!
come visit mine ...lol :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

beautifully written adisha :)..

urs..hemu..

swati said...

i can relate to it completely..

"written n re written
every moment every day
different rides of a carnival
experiences flashing away"

well written!!

take care!!

leggy said...

i loved ur poem...nice..first tym here..cool blog.

Brosreview said...

Nicely written!

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