my life, my terms
a blank slate with chalk marks
like a road well trodden
with varied tire tracks
written n re written
every moment every day
different rides of a carnival
experiences flashing away
colors and feelings
rain on a parched field
leaving behind notches inscribed
an exceptional essence yield ...
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7 comments:
well.. wat do i say.. this blog of urs i mean (the whole of ur poetic works) doesnt need comments.. i hav gone thru many of ur poems but never understood wat to comment... passing thoughts.. let it just pass by... its always a pleasure to read them :)
hey awesome blog......nice poetry!
im in love wid the free verse style of writing!!! :)
thts my all time favorite way to write poetry :D
keep going!!
i wanna come back as often as i could!!
come visit mine ...lol :)
beautifully written adisha :)..
urs..hemu..
i can relate to it completely..
"written n re written
every moment every day
different rides of a carnival
experiences flashing away"
well written!!
take care!!
i loved ur poem...nice..first tym here..cool blog.
Nicely written!
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